User blog:CrystallicWolf108/Pure of Heart Proposal: Humility

Malthus’s proposal was a success. Now, im going to bring you a candidate from the same story. I bring you the virtue of Humility herself.

What’s the Work?
Rethilor: A War of Sins and Virtues is a story I wrote on wattpad. It’s about Motomo, a 25 year old man who shows 3 of the 7 deadly sins, washing up on the shores of Rethilor. Rethilor is a fantasy filled island, full of magic creatures, but it also hosts the entrances to heaven and hell. In the story, Pride and the other sins are plotting to destroy heaven so they can remake the world in their hellish image, so Motomo, Malthus, Zoeflare and the Virtues have to stop them. But they also need to help Motomo become a better person, so he can’t be taken advantage of by the sins.

Who is Humility and what has she done?
Humility is one of the two deuteragonists of the story. She is the ruler of heaven, and represents the most important virtue, Humility (although she seems to show signs of the other virtues aswell…). If you think about it, shes basically the equivalent of God, while Pride is the equivalent of Satan. But how did she get to such a rank? Well, lets get into it.

When she was a human, she served as the older sister of Motomo, but their house caught fire. Humility had the choice to escape, but she remembered her sleeping brother, so she selflessly put her brother first, and got him out of the window to be caught by their parents, but she was hit by falling wood, and was consumed by the flames at the young age of 16. Self Sacrifice is pretty admirable from the start and it even got her chosen as Humility, but it doesnt stop there.

When she sees Motomo arrive on the island of Rethilor many years later, she sees that he became a pretty bad person, and she didnt want him to be bad, so she and the other virtues planned on helping him become better. Humility also realised what the sins were planning, and immedietly began to prepare against them. She also knew Pride was trying to take advantage of Motomos sins, and she wasnt going to let her brother fall into his grasp, so she does whatever she can to help so Pride cant take advantage of him. Later on, she and some other virtues then come down to fight alongside Motomo, Malthus and Zoeflare, against the sins when they were attacking dragon valley. She did whatever she could to help survivors, and protect the dragons and riders from the sins. When Pride killed Chastity during that battle, she was really upset and in tears about it, but it didnt stop her from focusing on stopping the sins.

Later on, she came to a scene where the heroes were searching for survivors of Prides latest genocide. She offered shelter to the survivors, and did what she could. This is where she decided to stay with Motomo, Malthus and Zoeflare so she could help where she can. Then, she later has a private discussion with Motomo. She tells him her brother will become a great hero, and that hes on this island, then she proceeds to drop a MASSIVE PLOT TWIST and reveal that Motomo IS her brother, and she was his late sister all along. She tells him that shes proud of him, but she also tells him not to be too harsh on himself, as its impossible to be flawless. When Malthus is later captured by the sins, she sends Motomo and Zoeflare to rescue him, but she doesnt go herself because angels dont survive in hell, even though she really wanted to help.

After Malthus is rescued, she prepares ALL of heaven for an attack from hell, to make sure that there is as little damage done as possible, but also tries to make sure that Pride doesnt shatter heavens core, which wouldve destroyed heaven entirley. She helps save Rethilor and also the world from the sins. She gets in some good damage against the sins, until she realises that Pride snuck into heaven, which makes her rush over to fight him. She and Pride get into a fierce battle, as she is desperate to keep everything safe from the sins. She eventually realises she cant do it alone, so she teleports Motomo to heaven to help, ordering him to kill the demons that are destroying heaven, but then tells him to come help against Pride. The two siblings fight Pride together, and eventually they come out victorious. Humility congratulates Motomo for dealing the killing blow against Pride, and then when she comes back to earth, she banishes Gluttony, Envy and the rest of the demons back to hell, and seals hell away so that they cant hurt anyone ever again.

Corrupting Factors?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYU_eDMr4xE

Admirably Standard?
She passes by a long shot. She put Motomos life before her own, which led to her death as a human, shes an amazing ruler of heaven, she helps whenever she can, she helped save the world from the sins and she sealed hell away so they couldnt hurt anyone again. Shes the most admirable in the story.

Moral Agency?
I covered this with Prides NPE proposal, and ill cover it here to prevent confusion. No, she is not made out of good. She was admirable BEFORE she became Humility, so becoming an angel doesnt affect her agency at all.

Conclusion?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3ALwKeSEYs (ok maybe I’m having too much fun)